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Alone on a desert island by Paul and Julien

Jon was sailing with his parents on the middle of the Atlantic Ocean when suddently, he fell of the boat. This is his diary.

27th March :

That day, I was on a boat with my parents, it was the day but there was much fog. I was cleaning the deck when suddently, a wave took me away outside the boat. My parents didn't see anything and my screams were inaudible. I have seen the ship going away and I start to lose my consciousness.

 

 

                                              Bateau, Tempête, La Pluie, Raining

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28th March :

I have woken up on a desert beach, I was thinking it was a dream but no, it was the reality. I have noticed that I was alone without my parents or anybody and I start screaming and crying. When I realized that was useless I start thinking : I remember a TV show. That was about and adventurer, alone on a desert island. The first step to survive was to build a tiny house with branches to spend the night and be protected of the weather. So I have started to search branches and sticks to build it. The second step was to find something to eat. I was hungry so I have started to find fruits (coconuts, bananas, pineaple) and a fresh water pool. The weather was good that day so I start sleeping in my humble house.

29th March :

I have had a good day but I was anxious. Am I going to live eternally there ? Am I going to die there ? I was angry. Why did my parents didn't hear me screaming ? I don't know... I've had a good day. I have found much coconuts. I think I have to draw a giant "S.O.S" on the floor. If someone in a plane fly over the island, he can call the rescues.

Résultat de recherche d'images pour "sos"

31th March :

I was on this Island for 4 day.I was finding something to eat when I hear a noise. It was now near to me. I have looked on the direction of the sound, the sky, and I have seen a plane. I start screaming "Please, help me !" and jumping on the ground. The plane has continued to fly and I've seen it going away... . I was sad and I was thinking : The best solution is probably to kill myself... .

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1st April :

I remember the plane of the other day, why did he continued his road without help me ? I was thinking when suddently, I hear the sound of a boat. I was thinking it was an other dream but when I see a man running in my direction, I start to run in his direction too. It was the rescues. The man in the plane say my coordinates to the rescues and now, they are here to save me ! I was very happy and the man catch me.

Résultat de recherche d'images pour "bateau de secour"

Résultat de recherche d'images pour "chambre hopital"

2nd April :

I wake up in an hospital chamber. My parents and my family were here with me. I was so happy. The man in the plane saves me and now I'm alive.

 

THE END.

By Paul and Julien.

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victor le best
  • 1. victor le best | 28/04/2018
c' est quoi la taille du lit sur l'image

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